The chapters "Introduction" and "ThinLinc Architecture" need love! The introduction chapter contains some outdated information and could be more helpful (it, for example, mentions courses which have not been a thing for quite some time). The architecture chapter does not cover the actual technical architecture of ThinLinc and is phrased as a sales pitch. We should keep this kind of jargon away from the TAG and keep it as technically informative as possible.
Change in MR 4 looks good!
Looked at changes done in MR 10, looks good!
Looked through the changes done in MR 14. LGTM :)
Read and compared the old TAG text for Introduction and ThinLinc Architecture, and the changes look good to me. The release notes look good too!
Final fixups commited as per the shared document.
